User:Erinford44/Job strain/Ssanchezmm Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Erinford44


 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Job Strain

To start off I would just like to say this article is definitely a challenging one since there isn't much actually said in the original article itself. Organizing this article will almost be like starting from scratch. I like your ideas of what you are wanting to add, and how you are organizing things. The lead so far very well written and I feel like it gets to the point. On the other hand, some changes and additions I would make are organizing your content a little better. I know this is just the draft but just making sure to have the sources listed at the very bottom is one thing. I would add quite a bit of information to your "causes" section as I feel it will probably be the most important one. In your lead section you mentioned the following : "To be productive and successful in the workplace, it is recommended that employers construct training programs to help employees cope with stress. " I would definitely add a section of some examples of those "training programs" you mentioned at the end. Other than that just some small spelling errors I saw like using the word "then" vs "than". This was great overall keeping in mind that you are basically starting from scratch.