User:Erinmerr/WFUV/Dylanduong Peer Review

General info
(provide username)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

'''Erin did a good job staying on topic and not saying things that are irrelevant to the article. Under the social media paragraph, she paraphrased correctly and did not plagiarize.'''