User:Erthorndyke/A Gathering of Old Men/Mak345 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?Erthorndyke


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=A_Gathering_of_Old_Men&diff=1187660481&oldid=939720821
 * & User:Erthorndyke/A Gathering of Old Men
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * A Gathering of Old Men
 * A Gathering of Old Men



Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead


 * Lead section should be added to give reader insight into the big picture of the novel

Characters


 * Character list provides reader insight onto their roles in the novel; could use more development of certain characters' background and motives

Content


 * Has good presentation of themes present within the novel through "Manhood" and "Racial Interdependence"

Symbolism


 * Section has the start of good symbols and themes that are present within the story

References


 * The page could use the addition of more references to increase support and credibility