User:Ervalen/Birth control in the United States/Zbussey Peer Review

General info

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Evaluate the drafted changes
I spotted a few comma splices and some other minor punctuation errors. It would probably be a good idea to read through a couple more times to make sure that all your punctuation is correct. Overall, the tone of your essay is consistent and matches the subject matter well.