User:ErwanCouturier/Rugby sevens at the 2020 Summer Olympics/Sk005aq Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * I could not find anything on sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rugby sevens at the 2020 Summer Olympics

Evaluate the drafted changes
- The brief introduction (lead) of the article can include a little more information about what the rugby seven is, how the team wins (brief rule), and how many medals are provided. I would suggest that the context of Competition can be in the introduction, not under the another lead.

- As a context gap, there is no explanation of rules of the rugby seven. It should be introduced as a significant factor of the article.Â

- I also think that the article should include a context to introduce how the athletes were elected to fight in 2020 Tokyo Olympic.

- The number of references are so few that it makes the article unreliable and weak. To improve the article, it needs more reliable sources and information.

- I would think that the article is neutral. I do not see biased sources and viewpoints about the topic.

- The article does have several links to other articles so it is discoverable.