User:Esaintl/Balut (food)/Chen2004 Peer Review

General info
Esaintl
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Esaintl/Balut_%28food%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Balut (food)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think overall it looks fine. There isn't really any grammatical error, the information looks detailed and everything makes sense. Since she is adding to an article a picture isn't necessary since the article already has images relevant to the topic. It does add more details to the description. It gives people who never had the food a good sense of what the food might taste like, and other who see this description and are not into the food can learn more about it, and maybe they would change their perspective on the food. But also she does say that there are ethical concerns which is like a disclaimer to people who might have negative viewpoints. So overall it is a good addition.