User:Esalo001/Aura Timen/Corydoney55 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aura Timen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Esalo001/Aura_Timen?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
everything in the article was very relevant, also very up to date. everything flowed nicely, the article introduced me to who she was where she came from. then led into more about who she is and what she does. nice touch! i do not see bias claims. i don't think their viewpoint were either under or over developed, it was straight to the point, enough information to keep me into the article an not to much to take me out of it! after checking citations i see theirs are very good, up to date, very resourceful. well done guys.