User:Esalo001/Aura Timen/Emilyprovost40 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Esalo001/Aura Timen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Esalo001/Aura_Timen?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Esalo001/Aura_Timen?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall impression is that the page is very organized, pretty concise and an amplitude of information was provided for Aura Timen and what makes her notable. Looks like a very professional wikipedia page with an appropriate amount of seemingly credible sources/references. I do think the COVID section is quite large, however it pertains to Timen's notability so I understand it's importance of inclusion. Maybe possible shorten in slightly and add a hyperlink instead to provide all of that info without taking up so much of your page. (if possible, otherwise looks great!)