User:Esboyens22/John Carlos/FishCactus13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Esboyens22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Esboyens22/John_Carlos?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * John Carlos

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great information is provided throughout. It appears to be to be unbiased and factual to the resources without being word-for-word. Some areas that could help make these sections even stronger would be checking for grammatical errors and looking at punctuation. One other thing that might be helpful to readers if they want more information would be providing hyper-links to some of the items listed throughout the article, like the Olympics, the Civil Rights Movement, Martin Luther King Jr., the Fair Housing Act, the Cold War etc.. I can see that this is going to be a great contribution to the main article and look forward to seeing the final result.