User:Escadar Alemayehu/Postpartum Depression/Cnoellec49 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Escadar Alemayehu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Escadar Alemayehu/Postpartum Depression


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Postpartum depression

Evaluate the drafted changes
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A lot of good information was added! I did notice a few of the sources you used were from as early as 2006. While certain things haven't changed, I would look to see if there are any more recent articles to support the claims. Also, while you included your sources after each section, when you publish you will have to add citations for every claim so they know what information is coming from which source.

I also may consider adding more information to the society and culture section. You indicate in the second paragraph that some cultures have certain beliefs, but do not indicate which cultures they are. In the section discussing "doing the month" it is unclear how that is directly related to postpartum depression, as opposed to just pregnancy in general. I think the sentence you added in the beginning helps to lead into that section though!