User:Escalara2019/Apollonius of Perga/Proc1996 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Escalara2019


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Apollonius of Perga
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Apollonius of Perga
 * Apollonius of Perga

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)