User:Eschell20/Green infrastructure/K8shep Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Eschell20


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Eschell20/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Green infrastructure

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your sources are great and really wide ranging! Adding all of these sections has obviously taken you a lot of work. I see you already have quite a few hyperlinks to other wikis, which is great. Your plan for continuing to improve your work all make sense. Great job.

I wonder if you are thinking not just about lawns and some of these private areas for more monied populations, but what about commons? There's a book by Carolyn Merchant called The Death of Nature. It's a history of science classic, so I bet we have a copy at S&T or it's available online. At any rate, it talks about the death of fens, forests, and farms in Britain in the medieval period because landowners started to take over the commons from the general population (thanks to mercantilism, capitalism, etc). That might be an interesting thing to talk about, but not necessary, as you've done a ton here already!