User:Escritora-2000/Regeneración/Dooley1836 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Escritora-2000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Escritora-2000/Regeneraci%C3%B3n?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Regeneración

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * The second paragraph seems really long maybe find a splitting point and make it into 2
 * I liked how the history section provided more context to the newspaper than the original wiki
 * Do you plan on copying over the lead from the original page? I think that it sounded good as is
 * themes section:
 * consider creating a little intro for this section just to introduce what you will be discussing (I saw this in my other peer review article and it really helped he article flow )
 * My goal when I read a wiki page is to learn quick info about a topic. I noticed that your sentences seem a bit long (running over 3 lines) and I am wondering if it would be easier to follow the article if you cut these sentences up a a bit.
 * example: "Consisting of a page or less of articles, the English section of Regeneracion attempted to appeal to its foreign audiences, many of which had already experienced revolutions of their own, by justifying the Mexican Liberal Party’s desire to escape a despotic government and better the condition of Mexico."
 * overall I think that you added great content! Good luck with the remainder of the project!
 * overall I think that you added great content! Good luck with the remainder of the project!