User:Escritora-2000/Regeneración/Guadalupequinones Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Escritora-2000)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Escritora-2000/Regeneraci%C3%B3n?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Regeneración

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that your overview is really good. I am a little bit confused in the section, where you say that "Magón was arrested by US gov...", but do not specify which Magon. I think this should be noted. Also, when you say that they were arrested over "mailing incident", I am a bit confused about what exactly happened. It might be worthwhile to talk about the incident further since it isimportant in the contextualization of the newspaper itself.

Also, you mention that Magon's conviction put an end to the newspaper, but again, which Magon? Ricardo? Enrique?

I really liked your History section and think that you did a nice job connecting the political climate at the time with the success of Regeneracion. I do think that you could expand on the point about it making its way to the English audience. Perhaps mention that they would shorten the captions like we talked about in class, or cite an issue.

I really liked reading about the Anti-religion theme and cannot wait to read about other themes. I liked how you included multiple sources.

For the citations, they are all properly cited and listed in the references. Also, all of the references are relevant to your topic. As a suggestion, I think it would be a good idea to try to include a picture or excerpt of one of the issues. The formatting was also very interesting in the paper, so it would be good for the reader to see.

Nice job!

-Guadalupe