User:Esteban1517/Sexuality in India/Peacheslovely777 Peer Review

Great work on your draft I enjoyed reading it, it was very interesting and educational. I liked how you organized your work in the first paragraph you introduced your readers to the sexual dysfunctions in both male and females in India what causes those dysfunctions. In your second paragraph you went on to explain the Dhat syndrome and how it manifests in both male and females which was a good addition. You also mentioned that sexual dysfunction is also culture bound and I think that you can elaborate more on that. I know you have your bibliography but I recommend also putting your references in your draft.

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