User:Esther Zhao210/Niki Caro/Cadebabade Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Esther Zhao210 - Niki Caro


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Esther%20Zhao210/Niki_Caro?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Niki Caro

Lead
The updates you have made the lead are solid. They summarize the changes you've made aptly. Though because you added it in there I would like to see more of how she managed to "combat the imbalance in Hollywood". It's a lovely sentiment I just didn't really know where that was covered later in the article.

Content
I had a hard time telling what you wrote vs what was already there. Though I think you chose the right the places to add to as they were the most lacking or erroneous. You add a lot of great stuff however you don't always follow up with more info on it.

In the first section that you edited (Early Career) I think you've made a good start. You've begun to add bits about the themes present in her work. I think it would be lovely if you expanded on this; not super in depth but enough to give readers a general idea of what to look for in her films. Some of her more important films are already covered so be careful not to be too repetitive. But I think it would make a good edition to have a small overview of what her work is like before the article dives into it proper.

Another place you do this is with the documentaries she worked on. There doesn't need to be a ton more but just a little something as to why she did documentaries suddenly or how they were received or why she didn't continues making them. From this article, and your edits, I have a good idea of what her career was but I don't have a clear picture of why she did what she did.

Sources and References
please add the year, or years, a film or show she did was produced next to the titles of her works.

You also have a lot of paragraphs or lines that are not sourced. I don't know where you got the info from or if it's all from one place but it needs to be sourced.

The Saturn Award link (after the bit about Mulan) is broken and needs fixing or a source if there is no wiki link for it.

Organization
I think you should revisit some of what you have written; I don't always understand precisely what you are trying to say (last line of early career). Or I know and the writing is not grammatically correct. I'd recommend writing it in a google doc/word doc then bringing it back into wikipedia as it'll allow you to catch the small things.