User:Etaylor6sfsu/The Day of the Triffids (film)/Moth1999 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

etaylor6sfsu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Etaylor6sfsu/The_Day_of_the_Triffids_(film)?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Day of the Triffids (film)

Peer Review

 * Effective plot summary
 * Thorough cast list
 * Consider rewording section on "Rocky Horror" for clarity ("it is this film" is a little clunky)
 * Period at end of "spits poison and kills."
 * Unsure where sandbox draft is?