User:Etaylor6sfsu/The Day of the Triffids (film)/Presleyjackson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Etaylor6sfsu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * The Day of the Triffids (film)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Day of the Triffids (film)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The article seems really well-balanced! It covers all the bases
 * I like that you added more to the Plot section
 * However, some of the details can be cut out, as it may be a bit long
 * Example: "...and the pilot tells her to lie and say everything is alright when he knows and accepts they are going to crash since nobody on the ground is responding to talk the plane down. While the stewardess starts attending to a small child, he asks if the pilot is blind and chaos ensues as everyone realizes the danger they are in." (paragraph 14)
 * I like how you added to the "References in Popular Culture section"- are you still going to include the Rocky Horror Picture Show detail? Or are you taking it out because it didn't have a source?
 * The wording in the Reception section can be changed to make it seem less biased
 * Example: "...it came as no surprise that critics were unforgiving" and "the radical assumption Yordan made"
 * All of the content is well-organized
 * All of the sources are reliable and current
 * The added information makes the original article more complete