User:Eternalsabre/Medusa/Cramir19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Eternalsabre/Medusa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Eternalsabre/Medusa


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Medusa

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * 1) The use of of added movie references and picture references impressed me based on the context they were used under. 2 Changes I would suggest would be to add in more citations to giver more of a presence. 3 the most important thing that could be done to improve would just overall be to add more information. 4 some of the things i could apply to my own article based from your own would be the placement of movie references based on the topic. 5 The information seems to be from reliable sources and is adequate and appropriate to the topic.