User:Ethan4757/Frank Braxton/Jalcar13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ethan4757


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ethan4757/Frank_Braxton?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

In the lead section "Braxton was considered one of the first black animators hired by both Disney and Warner Bros.. In addition, he was also the first black president of the Screen Cartoonist’s Guild in 1960." could probably be left off, that information is already provided within the rest of the content and although the lead section does require a brief description of the article, I think with just stating that he was an animator and director provides all the information needed.

Other than that the article is off to a great start. It was easy to follow and the tone read neutral. also great job with the references.