User:EthanSaef/Iu Mien Americans/Bfull342 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * EthanSaef


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:EthanSaef/Iu Mien Americans


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Iu Mien Americans

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello EthanSaef,

You seem to be adding valuable information to Wikipedia about Iu Mien Americans. Good job!

The content in your lead can work well into the main article. I suggest deploying what you have and determine which section each fact would fit best in.

I'm noticing the lack of proper in-line citations in your draft. It is expected to have at least one citation per sentence. Wikipedia has a different standard for these citations compared to typical college write-ups. Check out WP:CS and WP:IC for more information.

Keep going!

--Bfull342