User:EthanSaef/Iu Mien Americans/Zapn7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

EthanSaef


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Iu Mien Americans
 * Iu Mien Americans

Evaluate the drafted changes
I will be reviewing the live article.

Lead
The lead could use some work, I feel like details could definitely be added to it since it's so short, and doesn't reference all of the main sections.

Content
Additionally, there are some easily editable mistakes (spelling, punctuation) that can be fixed, especially near the end of the article. The organization of the sections could be improved.

Sources and References
A few sections have long blurbs of information yet zero citations.

Overall
I think, using our resources from the school, some citations/references should be added to the article. Since it is a relatively small group of people (according to the population) there might not be a plethora of academic research to find on the subject, but any additional information on culture could be added, and grouped together with music, film, and food. I find it odd that the Classification section carries "Traditional dishes" whereas on other articles this would be under the culture section.