User:Ethanstashek/Trench fever/Bel4247 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Ethanstashek)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ethanstashek/Trench_fever?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Trench fever

Evaluate the drafted changes
The epidermology section of your daft looks great. We would suggest to change the first paragrape of your section because what the diease is and where it came from is already in the introductions. The lead is already included in the introductions. Next the conent you worte is really relvent, We suggest that you include the recent studies or data of poplution rate of how relevent the disease is currently and talk about the different studies designs used to gather the data. Third, the tone is neutral and your soures work. We really like the inclusion of the historicial part of your section. that is something new to help the article.