User:Ethorsen/Mina Rees/Aserota2 Peer Review

General info
Ethorson
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Mina Rees
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Mina Rees

Evaluate the drafted changes
I thought they did a very good job at adding very good information with a good tone and having good sources to back it up. I think the only thing I would suggest is maybe add more citations to some of the sentences added. Overall, I think they did a really good job adding very informative content to the article about her life that was not there before. I think they had solid sources showing where they got the information. I think they wrote everything very well and in a neutral tone.

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