User:Ethorsen/Mina Rees/Jack1231344 Peer Review

General info
(Ethorsen)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/courses/Skidmore_College/Physics_and_Society_(Spring_2024)/articles/edited?showArticle=51059958
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Mina Rees

Evaluate the drafted changes
(added a lot more to the education. i will say one thing seems odd when comparing this verson and the one one wikipedia they are the same. i will say a lot of the edits seem off. for example look somehow this person has editied several wirds in the sentence but notthe whole sentences. like an example " of all women PhDs in mathematics in the US." this is a part of one sentence and the "the " and "of" both weren't edited by the editor. but they are in the sentence? it is confussing. )