User:Eumulos/Bosporan Kingdom/Bregresch Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Eumolos


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Eumulos/Bosporan_Kingdom?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bosporan Kingdom

Evaluate the drafted changes
The citation added seemed completely correct.

In the two sentences added to the Lead, capitalize "Greek subjects" and changes "Spartocid Monarchs" to "Spartocid dynasty."

In the Economy section, goods like animals, slaves, furs, grain, etc. don't need to be capitalized. There was one instance of Black Sea in the last sentence that goes uncapitalized. There were also a couple locations that could use commas, but aside from basic tweaks it seemed alright. The section was overall good, however needs at least one or two citations for where this information is coming from, but I thought it was a great addition to the article.