User:Eumulos/Bosporan Kingdom/Micah6001 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Eumulos)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Eumulos/Bosporan_Kingdom?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bosporan Kingdom

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

Some more information could be added to this section that leads into the new section in the article about the economy of the Bosporan Kingdom.

Article Body

Nothing has been changed yet for this section, but it could definitely be split into some more smaller subsections.

Economy

The section was a great addition to the article, and added a lot of background information for some of the economic information in the leading summary.

Sources

The sources added to this article are reliable and add to the article.

Overall

Your additions to this article are very informative, and expand on originally simply mentioned ideas in the original article.