User:Eunice5936/OLES2129

Activity 2 - From Scratch


 * Find an article on a topic that you are interested in or are knowledgeable about. Have a look at the first substantial edit on that page through its revision history.
 * If you had created this article first - what would you have done differently? If you were the second reader, how would you have edited the article? Write up your thoughts on your user page (100-200 words is plenty).

Article name: Romance scam

Comparing the newer versions with first published draft of this article, I would have changed the layout of the page to be more user-friendly, such as separating the content into better organized paragraphs, adding a specific published date, and using more formal tone in writing. If I were to edit this article, I would have added more content about this topic, such as representative case studies, appropriate images and photographs, a bibliography and common tricks to conduct frauds and some preventative measures to avoid it. I would insert subheadings under the topic to allow readers to be directed to the sections they are interested in.