User:Eva Ewing/Jouissance/Tap3y9 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Eva Ewing


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jouissance
 * Jouissance

Evaluate the drafted changes
I love the topic you've chosen I never would have thought about it and there is a lot of information to add on the page! I really like what you have added so far. I think that the fact about not translating jouissance is really interesting and important for people to know. Many probably haven't heard of this word or know the meaning behind it so adding that helps put it into perspective!

The biggest suggestion I have is to maybe add more to the first section (what everyone sees when first opening the page) I think that it can be kind of confusing and adding a bit more detail in those sentences could go a long way! There's also not a ton of resources so adding a few good ones there would help the article a lot as well!