User:Evabobeva/Black howler/Emmacgibson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Evabobeva


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Evabobeva/Black_howler?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Black howler

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Great article Eva! You have added so much to the original article. Well researched, well written, well presented! Your statements have been backed up nicely by citations (perfectly cited) and the article gives the reader a good overview and understanding of the black howler species. My one suggestion would be to present your sub-titles in a way that is more pleasing to the eye. Instead of having a large "description" segment, having larger, clear "headings" rather than "sub-headings" makes it easier for the reader to glance over the article and find the information they are looking for. Additionally, having a "sub-heading" for "behaviour and diet", followed by small "sub-headings" of "behavioural traits" and "diet" seems unnecessary and could be streamlined. Other than that, great job!