User:Evabraud/Agamidae/Yarelsu Peer Review

The article has useful information regarding physiology of Agamidae lizards. The phrase "positive correlation" was nice and sounds like professional writing. The only improvement I would say is to fix a few of the sentences, as they are really ran-on. Separating the thoughts could clear up confusion for readers. Something I can fix from my own article that I noticed this article did is to go more in depth when explaining. The article is organized, and has a nice flow. Nothing being added to the articles are irrelevant. The article isn't drawing conclusions, just stating facts. Neutral wording is used. The sources are reliable, and information comes from multiple sources.

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