User:Evasilako/Choose an Article

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Mitford family


 * Article Evaluation
 * The background section is very sparse. There are also some typos (e.g. "refued" rather than "refused"). The "Mitford siblings" section initially focuses on romances rather than the sisters' achievements, which is bothersome. The "Mitford sisters" section is relatively in depth, but it can still be improved upon.


 * Sources
 * Steinhaus, Kathryn. “Valkyrie: Gender, Class, European Relations, and Unity Mitford's Passion for Fascism.” McGill University, 2011.
 * Lovell, Mary S. The Sisters: The Saga of the Mitford Family. Norton, 2003.

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Gender equality in Rwanda


 * Article Evaluation
 * The "Gender equality in the Rwandan government" section is relatively short and not entirely informative. I feel like more could definitely be added to it. There is not a section regarding the connection between mainly women surviving the Rwandan genocide and the newfound gender quota in the parliament. This may be because it is somewhat speculative, but I do recall reliable sources linking the two.


 * Sources
 * Hunt, Swanee. “The Rise of Rwanda’s Women: Rebuilding and Reuniting a Nation.” Foreign Affairs, vol. 93, no. 3, Council on Foreign Relations, 2014, pp. 150–56, http://www.jstor.org/stable/24483414.
 * Burnet, Jennie E., "Gender Balance and the Meanings of Women in Governance in Post-Genocide Rwanda" (2008). Anthropology Faculty Publications. 5. https://scholarworks.gsu.edu/anthro_facpub/5.

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Dalkon Shield


 * Article Evaluation
 * The "History" section is relatively in depth and well-explained, though I dislike the final sentence. I attempted to do further research on this claim, but I was blocked by The New York Times ' site requiring a membership to continue. That is something that should be changed to a more accessible source. The "Aftermath" section is sparse and does not go into much detail. I believe that I could improve this section.


 * Sources
 * Hawkinson v. AH Robins Co., Inc., 1290 F. Supp. (10th Cir. Sept. 18, 1984). https://law.justia.com/cases/federal/district-courts/FSupp/595/1290/1683286/
 * Jones, R.W., A. Parker, and Max Elstein. "Clinical Experience with the Dalkon Shield Intrauterine Device." British Medical Journal, 1973, 143-45. PubMed Central. https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC1586323/