User:Evc32/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Midwife
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is overall well structured. The historical section is sufficiently long and efficiently engaging, however it misses out on the German background of Midwifery. In addition, I would love to do additional research to elaborate more on the list of notable midwifes introducing contemporary figures as well as men.
 * This article is overall well structured. The historical section is sufficiently long and efficiently engaging, however it misses out on the German background of Midwifery. In addition, I would love to do additional research to elaborate more on the list of notable midwifes introducing contemporary figures as well as men.
 * This article is overall well structured. The historical section is sufficiently long and efficiently engaging, however it misses out on the German background of Midwifery. In addition, I would love to do additional research to elaborate more on the list of notable midwifes introducing contemporary figures as well as men.

Endometriosis

 * Article Evaluation
 * This article presents a detailed description of Endometriosis. The paragraph concerning the diagnosis is very accurate and extremely helpful. I believe that there is something else that could be added to the section called « society and culture ». In the specific case, there are a lot of advancements that have been carried out in the treatment and cure of endometriosis. It would be interesting to compare and contrast how governments are defining their strategy of financial support to the patients affected by this chronic condition.
 * This article presents a detailed description of Endometriosis. The paragraph concerning the diagnosis is very accurate and extremely helpful. I believe that there is something else that could be added to the section called « society and culture ». In the specific case, there are a lot of advancements that have been carried out in the treatment and cure of endometriosis. It would be interesting to compare and contrast how governments are defining their strategy of financial support to the patients affected by this chronic condition.

Option 3

 * Baby Friendly Hospital Initiative
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article was very interesting. I was not aware of the initiative and of the impact it has had in the last 30 years. The source covers both the background of the initiative and the principles that constitute its essence, however the sector of the « regional schemes » could be expanded. Introducing the recent international adherences to the initiative and  updating the data of the many affiliates, could be important contributions.
 * This article was very interesting. I was not aware of the initiative and of the impact it has had in the last 30 years. The source covers both the background of the initiative and the principles that constitute its essence, however the sector of the « regional schemes » could be expanded. Introducing the recent international adherences to the initiative and  updating the data of the many affiliates, could be important contributions.
 * This article was very interesting. I was not aware of the initiative and of the impact it has had in the last 30 years. The source covers both the background of the initiative and the principles that constitute its essence, however the sector of the « regional schemes » could be expanded. Introducing the recent international adherences to the initiative and  updating the data of the many affiliates, could be important contributions.

Option 4

 * Fentanyl
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article specific content is Fentanyl, however the paragraph related to its frequent use in obstetrical anesthesia is directly connected to the theme of Obstetrics and gynecology. It would be interesting to expand on the postnatal dangers of its use and the consequences on the respiratory distress of the infant.
 * This article specific content is Fentanyl, however the paragraph related to its frequent use in obstetrical anesthesia is directly connected to the theme of Obstetrics and gynecology. It would be interesting to expand on the postnatal dangers of its use and the consequences on the respiratory distress of the infant.
 * This article specific content is Fentanyl, however the paragraph related to its frequent use in obstetrical anesthesia is directly connected to the theme of Obstetrics and gynecology. It would be interesting to expand on the postnatal dangers of its use and the consequences on the respiratory distress of the infant.

Option 5

 * Birth control
 * The article is detailed and well organized. The section on « modern methods » could be updated with recent advancements made in the field. In addition, the paragraph on accessibility could be integrated with information and statistics of the many countries that have not been mentioned.
 * The article is detailed and well organized. The section on « modern methods » could be updated with recent advancements made in the field. In addition, the paragraph on accessibility could be integrated with information and statistics of the many countries that have not been mentioned.