User:Evelynanstanford/Tate–LaBianca murders/Dkag12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User: Evelynanstanford


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Evelynanstanford/Tate%E2%80%93LaBianca_murders?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
The additions are relevant and substantive, with a neutral tone. The sources appear to be reliable and are regularly cited. Certain sentences could be shortened for reader clarity; otherwise, this is a strong contribution to the original Wikipedia article.