User:EvelynnRojo/Fourth-wave feminism/Gwainecarther Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

EvelynnRojo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:EvelynnRojo/Fourth-wave feminism


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fourth-wave feminism

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

- the lead doesn't need to be added as my peer is just adding onto it

Content

- the content added is relevant to the topic and up-to-date

Tone and Balance

- the content is neutral though the idea that instagram is feeding into beauty standards seems a bit biased

- the content added doesn't persuade viewers into one position or another

Sources and References

- the sources are reliable and the content is connected to what the sources said

-the links provided work

-there are not enough sources to check whether there is diversity of authors among the sources

- the sources are recent

Organization

- the content is easy to read

-there is no grammatical errors

Overall

- there could be more sources and edits made, though I know it is still early in the process.

-perhaps there could be more edits on the article itself