User:EvyWvy/Mohave tui chub/EvyWvy Peer Review

General info
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 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Mohave tui chub
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mohave tui chub

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * The lead is good with a general introduction that gives the scientific and common name of the fish as well as explains its overall status

Content


 * There is very little content - this article needs to be expanded upon
 * The only content discusses the threat of hybridization and a few unnamed locations that the fish has been introduced to for conservation
 * Two of the likened references led to dead pages that I removed, two links do still work

Tone and Balance


 * Tone is neutral and does not appear persuasive

Sources and References


 * more comprehensive sources are needed
 * multiple sentences do not have a citation to support it
 * There are good, peer reviewed sources available on this topic

Organization


 * Organization of what is provided is good
 * Needs much more content

Images and Media


 * No images are provided, but there are images in external links

Overall Impressions


 * This article is missing a lot of content and good sources - which I will be adding
 * Needs a fuller picture of the Mohave Tui Chub story
 * more photos to make viewing experience better