User:Ewr27/Sherpa language/Mjk388 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

@Ewr27


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ewr27/Sherpa language


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sherpa language

Lead
As of now, this article has not been divided into sections, so it would appear that the content now present is all within the lead. The Lead includes important general information, such as the region that the language is spoken in, how many speakers there are, and the structure of the language. Although the rest of the article has not been written yet, it appears to be a strong overview of what the rest of the article might eventually contain. It is a little lengthy and may be overly detailed in some aspects; for example, the details about the other languages of the speakers of the Sherpa language could potentially be moved to a different section within the article. The Lead's introductory sentence is clear, concise, and relevant.

Content
The content added is relevant to the topic and up-to-date. The topic sheds light on underrepresented populations by discussing a non-hegemonic language spoken by indigenous peoples.

Tone and Balance
The content is written from a neutral, non-biased perspective and contains fact-based information.

Sources and References
The content is backed up by one reliable secondary source, but the other five sources are invalid on account of them not being scholarly sources. There is no link available for the acceptable source by Thomas E. Graves, The Phonetics and Phonology of the Sherpa Language.

Organization
The content is easy to read with some grammatical/spelling errors. One example is the misspelling of indigenous (as "indinegious") as well as some punctuation errors. A consistent punctuation error is that commas are not enclosed within quotation marks.

Images and Media
No images added to the article.

Overall impressions
Overall, the content is relevant and easy to understand with some minor grammatical errors. It is important to find 6-10 more reliable references, as well as add more information to fill in the other sections.