User:ExSilvissima/Paideia/Sappho Cornelia Catula Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ExSilvissima


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ExSilvissima/Paideia?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Paideia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I agree with all of the edits you made, they make the article easier to read and more balanced.

The a in Ancient Greece should be capitalized.

In the places where you mention a book it might be a good idea to insert a citation.

Try to find citations for the information in the lead section.

Overall, good job!