User:Exoticfreccs/The Entombment (Giordano)/ArtHistorianStudent Peer Review

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Exoticfreccs
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Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is looking great! You begin by describing "The Entombment" and explaining the scene that is occurring in the image. Although this is a great analysis, I think you may want to being by stating the name of the painting, material, artist, and location of the MAG. This way, it frames your article with the reader understanding what they are reading about and where it is located. Additionally, including in-text references throughout the article would be very helpful in knowing where you got each piece of information from. There is also a feature on Wikipedia where you can link your article page to additional article pages, and I think it could help the reader if you include this feature when you are describing the biblical terms such as "Mary the Virgin" and "Hon the Evangelist".

When you are describing the Influence of the artist, I think it is a very interesting paragraph - but would also be great if you could link it back to your original painting and explain how the artist's influence is conveyed in the painting. Overall, I think that this is a great start - but definitely do not forget to include your sources and relate your points back to your original painting.