User:Exoticfreccs/The Entombment (Giordano)/McCupcake31 Peer Review

General info
User:Exoticfreccs
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Exoticfreccs/The Entombment (Giordano):https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Exoticfreccs/The_Entombment_%28Giordano%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
You need to add links to relevant wiki articles within the text such as "Luca Giordano" and "Naturalism" so that the reader has the came context that you have.

You reference Oreste without ever introducing this author. Give the reader a bit of context or else we get lost. Also, elaborate on what this critic said.

Stick to calling Giordano by his last name, consistency is better.

The last sentence needs some work, as of right now it feels abrupt and confusing for the reader.