User:Exoticfreccs/The Entombment (Giordano)/Orbsofperception Peer Review

General info
Exoticfreccs
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Exoticfreccs/The_Entombment_%28Giordano%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Exoticfreccs/The_Entombment_%28Giordano%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Starting with "infamous" feels a bit biased
 * I would add the "Naturalism" section into a paragraph of it's own
 * There are no citations in the article itself, though I can see your references
 * Should only refer to Luca Giordano as "Giordano"
 * I like the vocabulary you use to write about the piece!
 * I enjoyed reading about how naturalism influenced this piece, I'd like to hear about it a bit more