User:Exoticfreccs/The Entombment (Giordano)/PersianaAmericana23 Peer Review

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I believe this article is getting off to a good start. I am curious as to why the painting is being labeled as "infamous". Does this painting have a troubled history that we do not know about? Moreover, I am wondering what Oreste's opinion was on this painting and I feel like a brief translation of Oreste in English may better improve the reader's understanding of how this source is being used. I see that the writer is indicating that Luca Giordano has specific traits which have influenced his work throughout his career, noting his catholic attitude is interesting and I would be interested in knowing what his religious views were, especially if he had any in his teenage years when he completed this painting, according to the dating of this painting. To mention the sources used thus far, I see that there are two Italian sources mentioned: one is quite old being from 1966 and the other is much more recent, I would be curious if there are more recent sources that speak of Luca's early career and his training with José/Jusepe de Ribera which may concern The Entombment. There is a more recent (2001) exhibition catalogue that provides a very good understanding of the whole of Luca's career. It was a joint collaboration between the L.A. County Museum of Art and two other museums. Perhaps this source may yield more insights into Luca's early work and how that can inform our understanding of The Entombment.