User:Expat13/Calmecac/Cc66816 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Expat13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Expat13/Calmecac?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Calmecac

Evaluate the drafted changes
Really great work!! This article did not have much to begin with, so your additions really made this article go from okay to great!

Really great job at using current sources to aid in your information - this helps make the content more reliable and trustworthy

Also, excellent job at keeping a neutral tone throughout all of your additions.

I really enjoyed your additions to the section: "Student Life, Education, & Training" - your information was clear, simple and easy to follow!

I feel like all aspects of viewpoints are equally represented which makes this article much more reliable and authoritative.

A few things I've noticed:

The original article only has 1 picture which is not extremely helpful, I would suggest changing the picture or possibly adding some more media to your contributions.

Not sure how important this is, but one of your big headers is: "Etymology" which does not have much writing alonside it. I would suggest either making this a smaller heading since it does not have a lot of information to go along with it, or adding a little bit more!

Some small edits are needed; a few grammar edits, capitalizing some of the proper nouns for example for words like "Telpochcalli", "Macehualtin" and "Calmecac".