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I have been reading the article about the "Industrial arts ". It is a very great article to tell people about what is Industrial arts, but mean while I think it should add more various vision from other country. In the article, they only writing about situation for Industrial arts in the united state, maybe add more information from other culture will be better. And also, in the reading, only the Industrial Arts in New South Wales was mentioned, maybe the New South Wales is very important l original cultural for Industrial arts in United State. But I think only write about the New South Wales may be too narrowly to known the history of industrial art. In the reading I think add more history about the industrial arts is very important to let reader learn.