User:Eyannaib/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
David Klahr

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because school psychology is a topic that I am interested in. I chose an article on David Klahr at random because I felt that I had heard of his name before but I was wrong.

Evaluate the article
In the beginning the Lead section did great at introducing David Klahr and what he is known for. It did seem like some of the context was not up to date because they say he has been working as a professor for Carnegie Mellon University from 1969 to now. I would hope that Mr. Klahr has retired by now but I am not sure. I don't notice any bold statements therefore the tone and balance appears pretty neutral. With there being so much knowledge on Mr. Klahr, I was shocked to see the Reference page to be empty. The organization was also not organized appropriately. In his 'Life' section it was solely the author/authors acknowledging his scholastic accolades. It would have been appropriate to title this section as Academics or Education. This article contained one photo and that was a picture of Mr. Klahr which I appreciated. Overall, I liked the content of the article but it did not prove to be credible. It can be improved by adding references and organization.