User:Eyannaib/Pain psychology/Hhavenh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Eyannaib


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Eyannaib/Pain_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pain psychology
 * Pain psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is concise and seems to flow well with the current article. The current article does not include a definition of pain so I think this was a great add. It added some information about where pain psychology comes from and why. The drafted changes are relevant to the topic. There are a few sentences that seem to need citations. When these changes are made, they will be good additions to the article. The section for pain treatment might need some citations as well. I believe that adding citations will make that section stronger and more reliable. The content is pretty well written and organized for the reader. The main strength of the drafted changes is the definition of pain in the introduction. Overall, with some minor fixes this is a strong contribution.

Response to Review
Thank you for the feedback. I have added more references and placed them in the Pain Treatment section.