User:Eyannaib/Pain psychology/Vvinziant Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Eyannaib

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Pain psychology - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Pain psychology - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Eyannaib, I reviewed your pain psychology article and the article mentions very briefly about mental health problems that arise with pain but It does not say what they are. Maybe you could add to that section and talk more about what specifically those mental health problems are and how they relate to pain. The lead for this article is concise. It is not to to brief but it also does not give too much. As far as content goes, the only seemed to be missing is the mental health problems that I mentioned above. I believe the content in this article is neutral. When referring to the sources for this article there is a disclaimer that says that the article needs more medical sources and I agree with this because essentially the are is talking about pain and how it relates to psychology but pain is a medical problem. The contents of this article are not very well organized, there are not sections or topics for this article.

Response to Peer Review
Hi, thank you for your feedback. Some mental health problems that can arise from pain are anxiety, depression and suicidal thoughts... I mentioned all of these. I agree that my sections weren't very well organized and I have decided to add another section and change the title of another.