User:Ez2055/Charles Thomas/17jstraight Peer Review

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After reading this, I was left wondering what he contributed to psychology. Was it that he was just a professor of psychology? It was well written and flowed well. There were a few awkward to read spots (the beginning of scholarship section, the first sentence in death section) so you may want to look over those or make them more concise. Overall, it was a very informative article and was interesting to read about.

Reference 5 and 6 link to the same article so you might want to take a look at that.