User:Ez2055/Charles Thomas/Kallibeckstrom Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ez2055


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ez2055/Charles Thomas

Evaluate the drafted changes
After you introduce Charles William Thomas ll in the first paragraph, I would just refer to him as "Thomas" for the rest of the article. Consider linking other Wikipedia articles on some of the topics you addressed. For example, you could hyperlink "John Carroll University" and other topics that have Wikipedia pages dedicated to them. I think your article is very good, however, there are some punctuation issues. I would double check that your commas, periods, and quotations are in the correct format, you could run the article through grammarly as well. I find that very helpful for me personally.