User:Ezacarias01/Foreplay/Cjames2020 Peer Review

Hi!

I think you picked a very important page to edit. It's good that you added the piece about how it is a very significant process to women's sexual experiences because men do not require as much prior stimulation before jumping into intercourse. The one thing I would say, is proof read your edits for grammar and maybe consider adding some points to the History section because the original author left it a little empty. Also, great job adding in your references and in text citations. You might also want to make sure you have enough sources.

-Cyana